User:KhanRKerensky/German skill translation proposals

This is my list of skills, which in my opinion are translate wrong or in a bad style (like my english is :P).

Warrior
Skill’s english name	current translation	proposed (better) translation	comment
Executioner's Strike	Henkerschlag	Henkersschlag	Missing Fugen-S
Forceful Blow	Energetischer Schlag	Energischer Schlag
Magehunter's Smash	Magiejägerschmetterer	Magierjägerschmetterer or Schmetterschlag des Magierjägers	see note 1.
Leviathan's Sweep	Leviatanschlag	Leviatanenschlag	Also a missing Fugenlaut (Epenthesis)
Magehunter Strike	Magierschlag	Schlag des Magierjägers or Magierjägerschlag	see note 1.
Sever Artery	Arterienabtrennung	Arterienzertrennung or Arterientrennung	you can’t cut a artery off
Steelfang Slash	Schlag des stählernen Fanzahns	Schlag des stählernen Fangzahns	typo
Sun and Moon Slash	Sonne-Mond-Hieb	Sonnen-und-Mond-Hieb
Deflect Arrows	Pfeilablenkung	Pfeilabwehr	a more free translation is needed here
Soldier's Defense	Soldaten-Verteidigung	Soldatenverteidigung	no need for a hyphen
Soldier's Stance	Soldaten-Haltung	Soldatenhaltung	see above
Distracting Blow	Ablenkungsschlag	Ablenkender Schlag
Wild Blow	Rundumschlag	Wilder Schlag ?	"Rundumschlag" would discribe a skill attacking foes around you.

1. Both magehunter skills are translated wrong. "Magiejägerschmetterer" is really wierd and "Magierschlag" is a strike by a mage not against one. Both skills should use similar translations. btw: why is it Magehunter Strike and not Magehunter's Stike?

Ranger
Skill’s english name	current translation	proposed (better) translation	comment
Energizing Wind	Treibwind	Antreibender Wind rejected	"Triebwind" is another suggestion, but I think it sounds a bit wierd and the meaning of Energizing[1] gets a bit lost.
Heket's Rampage	Heket-Toben	?	I think a Rampage is more wild and violent then just "Toben". I don’t have a suggestion though. Same for Rampage as One.
Maiming Strike	Verkrüppelungs-Schlag	Verkrüppelungsschlag
Poisonous Bite	Giftbiss	Giftiger Biss	Hundebiss, Tigerbiss, Schlangenbiss... but Giftbiss? I didn’t know that poision can bite. ;)
Distracting Shot	Ablenk-Schuss	Ablenkungsschuss
Dodge	Abducken	Ausweichen	Abducken isn’t used really often[2]. The skill icon also doesn’t look like ducking down.
Broad Head Arrow	Eisenspitzenpfeil	Breitspitzenpfeil (or Breitkopfpfeil) ?	I have second thoughts about my suggestion. The current translation is a bit wrong but sounds nicer.
Crippling Shot	Verkrüppelungs-Schuss	Verkrüppelungsschuss
Debilitating Shot	Entkräftungs-Schuss	Entkräftungsschuss
Marauder's Shot	Plünderer-Schuss	Schuss eines Marodeurs	Imo Marodeur sounds nicer than Plünderer. The "-erer"-ending makes it hard to pronounce.
Penetrating Attack	Durchbohr-Angriff	Durchbohrender Angriff or Durchbohrungsangriff
Punishing Shot	Bestrafungs-Schuss	Bestrafungsschuss
Kindle Arrows	Zündelpfeile	Angefachte Pfeile Pfeile anzünden/entzünden	I think the current translation is a bit to much diminutive
Serpent's Quickness	Schlangen-Schnelligkeit	Schnelligkeit der Schlange Schlangenschnelligkeit
Called Shot	Ankündigungs-Schuss	Angekündigter Schuss	I think its meant like here[3] and not as a greeting shot.
Quick Shot	Schnellschuss	Schneller Schuss	Schnellschuss can be misunderstood[4]. However, it sounds nicer.

Monk
Skill’s english name	current translation	proposed (better) translation	comment
Healing Burst	Heilsalve	Heilender Ausbruch	A Salve[5] is not touch range ;). I'm open for a different translation for burst.
Healing Ring	Heilring	Heilungsring or Heilender Ring
Karei's Healing Circle	Kareis Heilkreis	Kareis heilender Kreis	A Heilkreis[6] is something very wierd.
Live Vicariously	Ersatzleben	?	Difficult to translate. See [7] and [8]. Ersatzleben means something like backup or replacement life.
Renew Life	Leben verlängern	Leben erneuern	You can't lengthens someones life, who is dead.
Vigorous Spirit	Energischer Geist	Lebhafter Geist	You get health not energy.
Shield of Deflection	Ablenkungsschild	Schild der Ablenkung	The current tranlation isn’t wrong, but Shield of Absorption, Shield of Judgment and Shield of Regeneration is already translated this way.